Sonnet · Rival Poet Sonnets

Sonnet 79

Whilst I alone did call upon thy aid,

My verse alone had all thy gentle grace;

But now my gracious numbers are decay’d,

And my sick Muse doth give an other place.

I grant, sweet love, thy lovely argument

Deserves the travail of a worthier pen;

Yet what of thee thy poet doth invent

He robs thee of, and pays it thee again.

He lends thee virtue, and he stole that word

From thy behaviour; beauty doth he give,

And found it in thy cheek: he can afford

No praise to thee, but what in thee doth live.

Then thank him not for that which he doth say,

Since what he owes thee, thou thyself dost pay.

What it's about

The speaker watches a rival poet win the beloved's attention and tells himself a consoling truth: that poet's praise is hollow because it merely describes what already exists. The beloved is the real author of their own beauty and virtue—the rival poet is just a mirror, not a creator. Flattery without originality isn't worth gratitude.

In plain English

Once you belonged to my verse alone, and my writing was the only place your beauty got its voice. But now another poet has arrived and eclipsed me—my work has gone stale, and you've turned to his words instead. I'll admit he's worthy of the job; you deserve a better pen than mine.

Here's the thing, though: whatever he praises in you, he's really just describing what's already there. He tells you you're virtuous, beautiful, talented—but he plucked those words straight from watching you. He has no praise left to invent. Everything he gives you in his poem already lives in you.

So don't thank him for his verses. He's not truly giving you anything new. You're the source; he's just the messenger. The credit belongs to you, not to him.

Lines that stick

  • Whilst I alone did call upon thy aid, / My verse alone had all thy gentle grace
  • He lends thee virtue, and he stole that word / From thy behaviour
  • what he owes thee, thou thyself dost pay

Themes

  • rival poet
  • beauty
  • flattery
  • self-deception
  • originality
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